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mappy41 November 25th, 2015, 1:44 pm

Follow U-Speed on Tapastic! :D
http://tapastic.com/series/u-speed

@Squirreltastic-Blue: Thanks for the corrections! It's now edited. :)
Oh that tiled floor is a texture fill which I adjust to fit the floor perspective.

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Squirreltastic-Blue November 25th, 2015, 3:05 pm

Just some English clean up.
Coach in the first panel "Don't you [get] your hopes up..."
The error is time sensitivity. Since Nico didn't have hopes of racing until just now, he's not keeping hope, but getting hope.

Nico in the fifth panel "Keon, is [something] wrong?"
It's not wrong, but it's a much more commonly spoken phrase.

Coach in the Sixth panel: "You made me remember [/] the good ol' days."
It's just a grammatical error. You can think of, but you don't remember of. You simply remember.

I'm really impressed with your background art, and shading techniques though! Keep up the good work!
A checkered floor is an absolute nightmare for me, and you pulled it off really well.